some quick thoughts in descendingish importance:
- mines at the end are really mean when pushing, and i can see this being even worse on uprates. i'd probably remove them since its hard enough without them already and it doesnt really fit thematically with the rest of the file having no mines
- really like the density buildup at 52.171
- the minijack js after the aforementioned density buildup feels a little bit underwhelming, i'd recommend some longer jack anchors to the held vocals to both up the difficulty of the section and also follow better the main thing that stands out about this section
- the part right before the minedodge ending seems underlayered; its charted the same as the intro which has a lot less going on. it sounds the same as 17.393 so it should be charted like that section
- this is pretty different from the standard """technical""" charting style because the layering decisions are pretty freeform. one example of this is the aforementioned buildup but in general there's not really the sort of additive layering structure you'd see in a normal chart. this ends up not being too much of an issue though because the chart has its own internal consistency of layering that makes it work out
- charting style overall reminds me a lot of old RARS charts which also had this sort of ddr-esque structure but with chordjack patterning
- bit unfortunate how short the song is (also, how is an extended mix 1m25s???)